Nemo - Revision history

Toni: Changed Captain Finn's spelling to Fin (as written in his main article)

2008-05-12T02:53:29Z

Changed Captain Finn's spelling to Fin (as written in his main article)

Christaub: Grammar

2007-12-22T09:08:54Z

Grammar

Christaub: Correction to quote

2007-12-22T09:06:48Z

Correction to quote

Sinclair: /* Accepted Fan Fiction Conventions */

2007-12-21T00:19:12Z

‎Accepted Fan Fiction Conventions

Christaub: Grammar and spelling fixes

2007-08-02T19:33:37Z

Grammar and spelling fixes

Christaub at 02:48, 22 March 2007

2007-03-22T02:48:53Z

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 Nemo is aware of his great physical srength, but prefers to introduce himself as a performer, and as such maintains the bearing and charm of that profession. As the main attraction at Sealand Aquarium Park he has the love and respect of millions, and he revels in it.
-Though at first he doubts the pleas of the [[Rescue Rangers]] to be alert to danger, when his tank is destroyed by [[All Hands']] the Octopus at the command of [[Captain Finn]] he instantly realizes his error, and saves the Rangers from drowning...by placing them in his cavernous mouth!
+Though at first he doubts the pleas of the [[Rescue Rangers]] to be alert to danger, when his tank is destroyed by [[All Hands']] the Octopus at the command of [[Captain Fin]] he instantly realizes his error, and saves the Rangers from drowning...by placing them in his cavernous mouth!
-His home in ruins and his career at stake Nemo is approached by Captain Finn in the [[Nautillus]]. Finn explains that he has "liberated" Nemo from the "imprisonment" at [[Sealand Aquarium Park|Sealand]] in an act against the Land Walkers. Finn then implores Nemo to join him in his terrorist campaign against the Land Walkers (humans and other land animals who see fish as food). Nemo though rebuffs this request and at the behest of the Rescue Rangers undertakes to ram the Nautillus, forcing a withdrawal by Captain Finn.
+His home in ruins and his career at stake Nemo is approached by Captain Fin in the [[Nautillus]]. Fin explains that he has "liberated" Nemo from the "imprisonment" at [[Sealand Aquarium Park|Sealand]] in an act against the Land Walkers. Fin then implores Nemo to join him in his terrorist campaign against the Land Walkers (humans and other land animals who see fish as food). Nemo though rebuffs this request and at the behest of the Rescue Rangers undertakes to ram the Nautillus, forcing a withdrawal by Captain Fin.
-Finn uses what he considers a betrayal by a fellow seacreature as an excuse to add another category to his list of enemies, this being anyone who breathes air!
+Fin uses what he considers a betrayal by a fellow seacreature as an excuse to add another category to his list of enemies, this being anyone who breathes air!
 The Rangers are surprised when Nemo informs them of his want to go to the Sealand dock where he can be retrieved, but show business runs through his massive veins. In a final and appreciated act of mammalian solidarity he returns them to the top of his tank where they can search for clues...via an energetic blast through his blowhole!
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 === Role ===
-In ''[[A Creep in the Deep]]'' Nemo plays the role of a strong and physical force to aid the Rangers in their first contact with Captain Finn. In a literal sense Nemo plays a voice of dissention among sea creatures to the plans of Captain Finn, showing that all human-sealife interactions are not gastronomic in nature.
+In ''[[A Creep in the Deep]]'' Nemo plays the role of a strong and physical force to aid the Rangers in their first contact with Captain Fin. In a literal sense Nemo plays a voice of dissention among sea creatures to the plans of Captain Fin, showing that all human-sealife interactions are not gastronomic in nature.
 === Episodes ===

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 Finn uses what he considers a betrayal by a fellow seacreature as an excuse to add another category to his list of enemies, this being anyone who breathes air!
-The Rangers are surprised when Nemo informs them of his want to go to the Sealand dock where he can be retrieved, but show business runs through his massive veins. In a final and appreciated act of mammalian solidarity he returns then to the top of his tank where they can search for clues...via an energetic blast through his blowhole!
+The Rangers are surprised when Nemo informs them of his want to go to the Sealand dock where he can be retrieved, but show business runs through his massive veins. In a final and appreciated act of mammalian solidarity he returns them to the top of his tank where they can search for clues...via an energetic blast through his blowhole!
 === Role ===

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 === Quotes ===
-* "Take a look over that wall..."
+* "Why don't you take a look over that wall..."
 === Trivia ===

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 [[Nemo]] shares the fate of his antagonist and would-be liberator Captain Finn in that there are scarce references to him in fanon.
-[[Category:Character]]
-[[Category:Canon]]
 [[Category:One-shot characters]]

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 Though at first he doubts the pleas of the [[Rescue Rangers]] to be alert to danger, when his tank is destroyed by [[All Hands']] the Octopus at the command of [[Captain Finn]] he instantly realizes his error, and saves the Rangers from drowning...by placing them in his cavernous mouth!
-His home in ruins and his career at stake Nemo is approached by Captain Finn in the [[Nautillus]]. Finn explains that he has "liberated" Nemo from the "imprisonment" at [[Sealand Aquarium Park|Sealand]] in an act against the Land Walkers. Finn then implores Nemo to join him in his terrorist campaign against the Land Walkers (humans and other land animalss who see fish as food). Nemo though rebuffs this request and the behest of the Rescue Rangers undertakes to ram the Nautillus, forcing a withdrawal by Captain Finn.
+His home in ruins and his career at stake Nemo is approached by Captain Finn in the [[Nautillus]]. Finn explains that he has "liberated" Nemo from the "imprisonment" at [[Sealand Aquarium Park|Sealand]] in an act against the Land Walkers. Finn then implores Nemo to join him in his terrorist campaign against the Land Walkers (humans and other land animals who see fish as food). Nemo though rebuffs this request and at the behest of the Rescue Rangers undertakes to ram the Nautillus, forcing a withdrawal by Captain Finn.
 Finn uses what he considers a betrayal by a fellow seacreature as an excuse to add another category to his list of enemies, this being anyone who breathes air!
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 == Accepted Fan Fiction Conventions ==
-[[Nemo]] shares the fate of his antagonist and would-be liberator Captain Finn in that there are scare references to him in fanon.
+[[Nemo]] shares the fate of his antagonist and would-be liberator Captain Finn in that there are scarce references to him in fanon.
 [[Category:Character]]
 [[Category:Canon]]
 [[Category:One-shot characters]]